THE LAW
Apr 28, 2017
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This idea doesn't belong to me, but to a friend of mine, who submitted it back in March of 2016. He was so excited and wanted to be a part of Onima's story. Unfortunately he could finish then. Hope this Onima Reborn thing will bring this wonderful dude back to our community!
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"When Akh’ian kids are 14 years old It's their task to go on a pilgrimage to saint holes called Canrak. Once they step in it, they are challenged to survive two days praying while examiners throw a rock at their heads. Those who survive are accepted as fully grown adults in their society. Families are forced to have 10 kids per year. If a family can’t afford taking care of that amount they send some of this kids to temple barracks and then those kids are trained to become fanatic soldiers, always ready to sacrifice themselves for the glory of Akhin god.
If fleet’s officer wants to become admiral he must finish attempt of Akhin. The attempt of Akhin involves gathering again in Canrak hole. Ten officers take part in it. At the bottom, examiners placed one of most feared creatures on planet Auros. When you want to scare any Akh’ian just spell that beast’s name Karmor’K. They wait until last of officers remains. The last one is promoted to admiral because he was the strongest and was chosen by god.
Women are only allowed to take care of home, breeding, taking care of children and sacrificing gifts in altars. One of the most important holidays is called Akhin’s Glory (Their new year celebration). When it occurs all of the akh’ian faith followers are forced to eat only meat because it's meant to become Akhin’s strength for next year. Higher ranks in Akh’ian community are occupied by elder priests.
Before a battle, akh’ian soldiers are supplied with drugs cultivated by a special cast of selected priests."
I really like this civilization but i personally think it needs more detail about their god, rituals, policies and other things.
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